Make notes on what happens to Edmund when he arrives in
Narnia.
Use the writing frame below to plan Edmund’s recount of his
arrival in Narnia.
Check it with a partner and then write the recount out neatly
Start with an
introduction
Include who, where,
when.
Edmund saw the
queen …
Paragraph 2
What did Edmund do
on meeting the
Queen?
Include a connective.
e.g. first
Paragraph 3
What happened next?
Start the paragraph
with a connective
e.g. after, before, then
Paragraph 4
What else happened?
Use another different
connective to start
your paragraph
Can you write
another
paragraph?
Finish with a
conclusion
How did Edmund’s
visit end?